Hmm.. part VII.. it continues.. What now? does the story go on?

It took me a while to go back and copy and paste your earlier editions to allow me to read it all in one sitting. A fascinating tale you are weaving with the mystery of the man, the bag, and your lack of memory or drug induced stupor. Your flow of words are strong, my only critique for now would be to structurally even out your lines more. I have never been a big fan of three to four words per line especially for a lengthy piece as what you are doing.